Comment to Jia Fang’s blog:
http://michelleljf.wordpress.com/2009/09/26/final-box/#comment-15
I really like the whole presentation of your polaroids. I think it is rather unique and you gave it a personal touch with the handmade box. It does look like something you cherish and treasure a lot. I also like your choice of colours I think it’s very feminine, very you heehee. Maybe you could have considered making the box look older and give the pictures an ‘aged’ antique feel to extend on the idea of a ‘treasure box’. I just think that by giving it a bit of ‘age’ it kind of shows how you have been keeping and treasuring these memories.
Nevertheless I think you did a really good job(:
Comments on Mabel’s blog:
http://mabelthebimbo.wordpress.com/2009/09/27/coursework-final/
I REALLY LOVE YOUR WHOLE CONCEPT OF A TIMECAPSULE
i think it’s very interesting and unique and the idea of searching for memories of our childhood is really quite intriguing. Plus it is something i believe all of us can relate to. So KUDOS to you for the great concept (: I was just thinking maybe you could have used black duct tape to past down your sketches instead? cause the masking tape makes it look a bit unfinished/:
But i really like the fact that you pasted sketches and personal diary entries it does incite fond memories of my childhood for me(:
GREAT JOB!(:
Comment on Jenny’s blog:
http://bouncingponytail.wordpress.com/2009/09/27/coursework-prep-studies-on-cartoon-characters/#comment-33
Heyhey!
I love the sketches! i think that drawing fabric is actually quite a challenge with all the folds and creases but i feel that you did a really good job. I also like how your inspiration is based on Disney characters i think that is really something that we can all relate to(: and i feel that it’s great that your revamping the classic Disney characters and giving it s modern twist(: although maybe you could have done more details in terms of the texture of the material? also you could have extended on the idea of roses as i think they are really very intrinsically designed it’s quite amazing, Maybe you could have explored the idea of strong geometrical shapes in your designs?
GOOD JOB though i really love the whole concept behind your coursework(:
Comment on Hui Ying’s blog:
http://smallandtiny.wordpress.com/2009/09/27/coursework-final/#comment-23
I think it’s really interesting that your coursework actually addresses a pressing issue present in society today – pollution. I feel that it is really meaningful. And i think the rubbish at the bottom of the pond (?) is very well painted, can tell that you put in alot of effort and paid attention to all the details up to the reflection of the bottle(: i think that the proportion of the child’s face could be worked on though, her nose seems a little weird, like a bit too long/:
BUT YOUR PAINTING SKILLS ARE SUPERB! GOOD JOB! 
Comment on Wandong’s blog:
http://iheartapesforever.wordpress.com/2009/09/30/coursework-part-1/#comment-12
I think your photography is really quite amazing. I love the way your frame your photos and explore very unique angles. I especially like the first photo of this set it really looks professional. The composition is complicated, yet it’s not cluttered which makes it very appealing. I think it’s really quite cool how you manage to take everyday objects and make them look so good in photos(: i think the last photo with the hands on the piano looks a bit posed though. maybe you could have taken while someone is really playing the piano so the fingers will look a bit blurry? hahah i know blurred images are not exactly ideal but i thought it might be interesting(:
anyway good job! (:
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Comments October 5, 2009
Comment to Jia Fang’s blog:
http://michelleljf.wordpress.com/2009/09/26/final-box/#comment-15
I really like the whole presentation of your polaroids. I think it is rather unique and you gave it a personal touch with the handmade box. It does look like something you cherish and treasure a lot. I also like your choice of colours I think it’s very feminine, very you heehee. Maybe you could have considered making the box look older and give the pictures an ‘aged’ antique feel to extend on the idea of a ‘treasure box’. I just think that by giving it a bit of ‘age’ it kind of shows how you have been keeping and treasuring these memories.
Nevertheless I think you did a really good job(:
Comments on Mabel’s blog:
http://mabelthebimbo.wordpress.com/2009/09/27/coursework-final/
I REALLY LOVE YOUR WHOLE CONCEPT OF A TIMECAPSULE
i think it’s very interesting and unique and the idea of searching for memories of our childhood is really quite intriguing. Plus it is something i believe all of us can relate to. So KUDOS to you for the great concept (: I was just thinking maybe you could have used black duct tape to past down your sketches instead? cause the masking tape makes it look a bit unfinished/:
But i really like the fact that you pasted sketches and personal diary entries it does incite fond memories of my childhood for me(:
GREAT JOB!(:
Comment on Jenny’s blog:
http://bouncingponytail.wordpress.com/2009/09/27/coursework-prep-studies-on-cartoon-characters/#comment-33
Heyhey!
I love the sketches! i think that drawing fabric is actually quite a challenge with all the folds and creases but i feel that you did a really good job. I also like how your inspiration is based on Disney characters i think that is really something that we can all relate to(: and i feel that it’s great that your revamping the classic Disney characters and giving it s modern twist(: although maybe you could have done more details in terms of the texture of the material? also you could have extended on the idea of roses as i think they are really very intrinsically designed it’s quite amazing, Maybe you could have explored the idea of strong geometrical shapes in your designs?
GOOD JOB though i really love the whole concept behind your coursework(:
Comment on Hui Ying’s blog:
http://smallandtiny.wordpress.com/2009/09/27/coursework-final/#comment-23
I think it’s really interesting that your coursework actually addresses a pressing issue present in society today – pollution. I feel that it is really meaningful. And i think the rubbish at the bottom of the pond (?) is very well painted, can tell that you put in alot of effort and paid attention to all the details up to the reflection of the bottle(: i think that the proportion of the child’s face could be worked on though, her nose seems a little weird, like a bit too long/:
BUT YOUR PAINTING SKILLS ARE SUPERB! GOOD JOB!
Comment on Wandong’s blog:
http://iheartapesforever.wordpress.com/2009/09/30/coursework-part-1/#comment-12
I think your photography is really quite amazing. I love the way your frame your photos and explore very unique angles. I especially like the first photo of this set it really looks professional. The composition is complicated, yet it’s not cluttered which makes it very appealing. I think it’s really quite cool how you manage to take everyday objects and make them look so good in photos(: i think the last photo with the hands on the piano looks a bit posed though. maybe you could have taken while someone is really playing the piano so the fingers will look a bit blurry? hahah i know blurred images are not exactly ideal but i thought it might be interesting(:
anyway good job! (:
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